Our latest poem creations. Today we were looking at adjectives and how to use them in poems. Since 4 of Room 8 have had chicken pox this term we decided that we should write poems about chicken pox! Here is the one we wrote as a class. Katie made it into a movie - we might try doing this with our own ones this week.
This term we are looking at Poetry. If you write a poem feel free to post it here so we can all see it. Click on "Post a Sticky" and it will take you to the wallwisher. Then you just have to double cllick on the grass and you can add your poem. Please don't delete other people's poems.
Let's get creative!
We will also be creating some poems using www.tagxedo.com - here is what they might look like, using the names in our class:
Being Happy
We had our first go at writing poems. We decided to write poems about when we were happy.
I feel happy when it's Easter
I feel happy when it's Christmas
I feel happy when it's Halloween
By Brodie
I am happy when it is sunny
I am happy when it is Christmas
I am happy when it is my Birthday
I am happy when it is Easter
By Amelia
I am happy when I go to the zoo with my Dad
or smelling roses
or being with butterflies
love hearts are great
ha ha la la la la la lo
By Savannah
I am happy when the sun is out
because it shines
and it is bright
By Marae
I feel happy when I am at Australia
or on an airplane
By Finn
I am happy when I am playing with my friends
or at my birthday
I love it!
By Nicole
I feel happy when it's the school holidays
and when it's Easter
and Christmas
and the weekend
and Summer and Winter.
By Erin
I am happy when I play with someone
At Christmas, playing ball tag at Christmas time
Being Happy
By Troy
I am happy when it is Christmas
my Birthday
and at Easter
By Adam
I feel happy when it's summer
I feel happy when it's the weekend
I feel happy when it's Easter
I feel happy when it's school time
By Olivia
I feel happy when I'm at my Dad's
When I'm at my Mum's
When I'm at my Grandpa's
When I'm at my Pop's
By Zachary
When I'm happy I am at the pools
When I'm happy I am going to peoples birthdays
By Robyn
I feel happy when I get some presents from Santa
and I love my Mum and Dad
I like Santa
By Jamie
I am going to the swimming pool
By Emily
I am happy when it is Christmas
I am happy when it is Easter
and I am happy when it is my party
because I get presents every time
and I love it when I play ball with someone
because ball is fun
and I am really happy when I am in bed
and I am happy when I go to the zoo
I am happy when I eat
Being happy
By Grace
Grace and Amelia's Poems from Home
Grace and Amelia got very creative at home and wrote these poems. Tell us what you think!
Goat in a boat
Having a float
Won't goat stand up?
No he won't
By Amelia
Goat goat
Won't he stand up in his boat
Silly old goat
He stood up in his boat
He went into a slope
Ah
Ah
Ah
Ah
Ah
Ah
That was fun
Goat called
By Grace
Starfish
Starfish have 5 arms
And they have suction cups
It lives in the water
By Grace
Squirm Worm
Squirm worm
Like a piece of meat
Just for you and me
I like meat
Do you like meat?
I know lots of worms
Glow-worms
I know more
You guess one
By Grace
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